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Can you check this sentenses?>♡<
1/21
Today My plan was "To go to the pillates center"
But I couldn't go there
Because I did a pillates yesterday and the day before, so my body is felt too tired
When I feel tired, I need to sleep.
If I don't do that, I will over eat to forget for "tired"
2021년 1월 21일 오후 2:17
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Can you check this sentences?>♡< 1/21 Today My plan was "To go to the pilates
center" But I couldn't go there Because I did pilates yesterday and the day
before, so my body felt too tired. When I feel tired, I need to sleep. If I
don't do that, I will over eat to forget I'm tired.
Great, you seem to understand everything you want to say and deliver it in an organized manner. Just remember that sometimes writing less in a sentence is the way to go. 화이팅!
2021년 1월 21일
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Can you check this sentenses?>♡< 1/21 Today My plan was "To go to the pillates
center" But I couldn't go because I did pillates yesterday and the day
before, so my body is felt too tired. When I feel tired, I need to sleep. If I
don't do that, I will over eat to forget that I’m "tired"
2021년 1월 21일
1
Can you check this sentence?>♡< 1/21 Today My plan was to go to the pilates
center. But I couldn't go there Because I did Pilates yesterday and the day
before, so my body felt too tired When I feel tired, I need to sleep. If I
don't do that, I will over eat to forget how tired I am.
2021년 1월 21일
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