咖啡店老板
I was born and grown up in Shenzhen, but my parents were born in Jieyang of the Guangdong province, so traditionally, my hometown is Jieyang. But I don’t know much about Jieyang, so just let’s talk about Shenzhen.
Shenzhen is a big city in which gathering many people from all over the world. People came here for work and making money so as to feed themselves and their family, and to be closer to their dreams. We generally call them dreamers. But there are many youths left here for the heavy pressure and the fast-paced life. As a man who has born and raised here, I couldn’t see that until I graduated from college and came out to work.
2021년 12월 26일 오후 1:53
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I was born and grew up in Shenzhen, but my parents were born in Jieyang of the Guangdong province, so traditionally, my hometown is Jieyang. But I don’t know much about Jieyang, so let's just talk about Shenzhen.
Shenzhen is a big city in which many people from all over the world have gathered. People came here for work and making money so as to feed themselves and their family, and to be closer to their dreams. We generally call them dreamers. But there are many youths who live here for the heavy pressure and the fast-paced life (sorry, do you mean many youths who live here, or many youths who have left, meaning moved away from here?) As a man who was born and raised here, I couldn’t see that until I graduated from college and came out to work.
咖啡店老板 , you did a great job. It's nice to read a little about your city. I have heard there are many people from all over China, as well as all over the world, who live in Shenzhen. Let me know if you have any questions, and I hope the corrections helped.
2021년 12월 26일
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