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Hi guys I wrote something and I want someone tell me about it I mean it's true or there is something wrong? "The similarities between attending a college course versus distance learning, when attending a college course, the student can be with the teacher and students in the same semester, while distance learning also includes the separation between students and the teacher, and both receive information with the same activity and effectiveness of the student in learning the practical material Because it is based on self-learning. When attending a college course and distance learning are also similar that they need a high cost, especially at the beginning of their application, in order to prepare the environment for each of them and to agree with the requirements of both. On the other hand, when attending a college course versus distance learning, they have important differences, including that distance learning depends on The use of wired electronic technologies such as desktop computers and laptops, unlike when attending a college course because it depends on the use of wireless technologies such as mobile phones, personal digital assistants, mini-computers, smart phones and another big difference which is the privilege of learning when attending a college course easily exchanging messages between learners Each other, and between them and the teacher via SMS or MMS messages, or by meeting them. As for distance learning, it needs e-mail, and the teacher or student may not see it immediately." It's true or no? Thanks for your help guys

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Wow, your English level is pretty high, there is only a couple of tiny mistakes that need fixing but other than that this writing is flawless. You have to say distance learning "is" also similar instead of "are". And immediately after it's better to say " in that" instead of that. Also, "Smartphones" is one word and doesn't need a space in the middle. And that's about it. If you want to improve your English even more by a specialized plan made just for you or improve your speaking with conversation practice classes check out my profile and I can help you out. ^-^

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