Molly
Today I walked a lot. Maybe I have walked about almost 10 km. It is nothing to some people but it is something for me, Typically, not many people stay at home and sit as much as me. Everyday, I just do some excercise but don't walk much. Walking is fun. I will do it more often.
2020년 11월 22일 오후 3:30
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Today I walked a lot. Maybe I have walked about almost 10 km. It is nothing to some people but it is something for me, Typically, not many people stay at home and sit as much as me. Everyday, I just do some excercise but don't walk much. Walking is fun. I will do it more often.
Today I walked a lot. Maybe I have walked almost 10 km. It would seem nothing to some people but to me it is a lot. Typically, not many people stay at home and sit as much as I do. Everyday, I just do some exercises, but I don't walk much. Walking is fun. I will do it more often. Excellent job Molly. Your writing is improving. I made a couple of small changes but the paragraph really only needed very small corrections. Congratulations!
2020년 11월 26일
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