Is there anything wrong with the following sentence? It’s a practice that some movies struggle to do, with many either getting too enthusiastic about showing their big plot points, and others simply n

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Is there anything wrong with the following sentence?

It’s a practice that some movies struggle to do, with many either getting too enthusiastic about showing their big plot points, and others simply not catching the magic of the movie.

2017년 4월 24일 오전 6:11

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Good point -- it is indeed illogical, albeit perfectly understandable.

2017년 4월 24일

Is there anything wrong with "either... and others"?

2017년 4월 24일

The only problem is that we never say to "do a practice." We might (if appropriate) be able to use "emulate," or simply rewrite the sentence.

2017년 4월 24일

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