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Olivia and Carter, the founders of One More Generation, are exceptionally well-informed individuals. Upon learning about the impact of the oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico, they took immediate action. In similar circumstances, many people, including adults, may simply ponder over the issue without taking tangible actions. It's important to recognize that one practical action can hold more weight than a thousand ideas alone. By actively assisting wild animals, Olivia and Carter were able to create a meaningful difference.
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Olivia and Carter, the founders of One More Generation, are exceptionally well-informed individuals. Upon learning about the impact of the oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico, they took immediate action. In similar circumstances, many people, including adults, may simply ponder over the issue without taking tangible action. It's important to recognize that one practical action can hold more weight than a thousand ideas alone. By actively assisting wild animals, Olivia and Carter were able to create a meaningful difference.
Great. You use “action” three times. Could you change one or two of them?
2024년 1월 15일
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