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This summer I visited a city in the South, which is a touristic place in my country and is known as being expensive. During my trip, I observed that the prices were almost same with my hometown. Later, I thought a lot that probably everything we searched online before going on a trip is way more objective than we think.
Moreover, we need to put aside the things outside and discover by ourselves.
2023년 12월 17일 오후 5:38
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This summer, I visited a city in the south which is a touristic place in my country and is considered to be expensive. During my trip, I noticed that the prices were almost the same as those in my hometown. Later, I thought a lot that probably everything we searched online before going on a trip was way more objective than we thought. Moreover, we need to put aside the things outside and discover everything by ourselves.
This summer, I visited a city in the south that is a popular tourist destination in my country and is regarded to be pricey. During my visit, I figured out that the costs were nearly identical to those in my hometown. Later, I realized that everything we looked up online before going on a trip was probably more objective than we believed. Furthermore, we must put aside the things outside and discover everything by ourselves.
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2023년 12월 17일
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This summer I visited a city in the south, which is a touristic place in my
country and is considere to be expensive. During my trip, I observed that the
prices were almost the same as in my hometown. Later, I thought a lot that probably
everything we searched online about before going on a trip is way more inaccurate / subjective than
we think. Moreover, we need to question those things and find out by
ourselves.
2023년 12월 17일
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