I will never forget the time she held me close during a tough moment. I was feeling lost and overwhelmed, and she just wrapped my arms around me, letting me know that I wasn’t alone.

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Oliver Felix

2024년 8월 28일 오후 11:34

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I will never forget the time she held me close during a tough moment. I was feeling lost and overwhelmed, and she just wrapped her arms around me, letting me know that I wasn’t alone.

Pronoun Consistency: Changed "wrapped my arms around me" to "wrapped her arms around me" to accurately describe who is performing the action. Clarity: The rest of the sentence was already well-written, so no further changes were necessary.

2024년 8월 30일

I will never forget the time she held me close during a tough moment. I was feeling lost and overwhelmed, and she just wrapped her arms around me, letting me know that I wasn’t alone.

You wrote very well, just pay attention to the possessive pronouns (such as "my" and "her")

2024년 8월 29일

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