Nakajiii
If I can go back 60years ago, I wanna go to The Beatles's live concert. I want to listening for "She Loves You" and "Sgt. Pepper's Lonly Hearts Club Bands". I like these songs. I'm loving rock'n'roll and psychedelic rock.
2025년 5월 13일 오전 5:33
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If I could go back to 60 years ago, I would want to go to a concert by/of The Beatles. I want to listen to "She Loves You" and "Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band". I like these songs. I'm loving rock'n'roll and psychedelic rock.
'Go back 60 years' OR 'Go back to 60 years ago'. WANNA is too informal for writing practice - it's only for texting with friends, etc. CONCERT is already live (unless there's some other kind of concert I don't know about), so you don't need to so specify that it's live. I like the Beatles too. By the time I started going to concerts they had already broken up.
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