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English goals I'm going to talk about my english learn goal for this summer. I hope someone can help me and correct my mistakes in this text. Really, I didn't know about what I write here, so I decide write about my goal to improve may knowledge in English. Last month, I achive B1 English level. Therefore, I hope to achive the B2 level after summer. To this, I need your help, because I really write so bad in English. I wanna learn english by myself. No English courses or others. Yesterday, I start with grammar and vocabulary. Can you give me some adviced? I'm looking forward to your feedback :)
2019년 7월 2일 오후 4:09
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English goals

I'm going to talk about my English learning goals for this summer. (1)  I hope someone can help me and correct my mistakes in this text.

Really, I didn't know about what I  to write here, so I decided to write about my goal to improve may knowledge in of the English language.

Last month, I achive  achieved a B1 English level. Therefore, I hope to achieve the B2 level after summer. To this end, I need your help, because I really write am so bad in at English. I wanna want to learn English by myself. No English courses or other formal forms of instruction. Yesterday, I started with grammar and vocabulary.

Can you give me some adviced?
I'm looking forward to your feedback :)


1) I think I would probably say: I am going to talk about my goals for learning English this summer.


2019년 7월 2일
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English goals

I'm going to talk about my english learning goal for this summer. I hope someone can help me and correct my mistakes in this text.

Really, I didn't know <s>about</s> what <s>I</s> to write about here, so I decided to write about my goal to improve <s>may </s>my knowledge in English.

Last month, I <s>achive</s> achieved a B1 English level. <s>Therefore,</s> I hope to achieve the B2 level after summer. To do this, I need your help, because I really write so badly in English. I <s>wanna</s> want to learn English by myself. No English courses or others. Yesterday, I started with grammar and vocabulary.

Can you give me some advice<s>d</s>?
I'm looking forward to your feedback :)
2019년 7월 2일
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