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The Difference Between Patriotism and Nationalism This is the 51st day. In my eyes, both patriotism and nationalism are inextricably linked with sentiment.The two, however, project themselves through different sentiment. (Maybe the two sentences can be combined into one, but I fail to so) The former is by love, loyalty and concern, while the latter is by overdue confidence, a sense of priority and stubbornness. (I want to write more about this topic, but now I must sleep) I am grateful to everyone, especially to my family, friends and teachers. Good Night.

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The Difference Between Patriotism and Nationalism

This is the 51st day.
In my eyes, both patriotism and nationalism are inextricably linked with sentiment. The two, however, manifest themselves through different sentiments. The former is by love, loyalty and concern, while the latter is by overdue confidence, a sense of national priority, and stubbornness.
(I want to write more about this topic, but now I must sleep)
I am grateful to everyone, especially to my family, friends and teachers.
Good Night.


Madeline's corrections are fine. These are suggestions, and you missed one space after a period.
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The Difference Between Patriotism and Nationalism

This is the 51st day.
In my eyes, both patriotism and nationalism are inextricably linked with sentiment.The two, however, project themselves through different sentiments/manifest themselves in different ways. The former is by love, loyalty and concern, while the latter is by overdue confidence, a sense of priority and stubbornness.
(I want to write more about this topic, but now I must sleep)
I am grateful to everyone, especially to my family, friends and teachers.
Good Night.

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