Foods (thank you for your corrections)
I talked with a french friend and I asked her “are french deserts usually sweet?” and she answered yes. I really like sweet foods, but when I eat sugary foods, I soon get pimples in the face. But when I get stressed, I become to want to eat sweet foods. So I just asked her to buy and bring me some french sweet snacks when she goes back to french in the vacation.
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Foods (thank you for your corrections)
I talked with a French friend and I asked her if French deserts are usually sweet?” and she confirmed. I really like sweet foods, but when I eat sugary foods, I get pimples on my face. But when I get stressed, I strive for sweet food. Therefore, I asked her to buy and bring me some french sweets when she went back to French on her vacation
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Foods (thank you for your corrections)
I talked with a french friend and asked her “are french deserts usually sweet?” and she answered yes. I really like sweet foods, but after I eat them, I soon get pimples on my face. However, when I get stressed, I want to eat sweet foods. So I just asked her to buy and bring me some french sweet snacks when she goes back to french in the vacation.
Hi there. If I were you I would write it in this way:
I talked with a French friend and asked her whether the French desserts are usually sweet, and she said yes. I like sweet foods, but after I eat them, I soon notice that I get pimples on my face. However, when I am stressed, I find that sweet foods become more desirable. Therefore, I just asked her to bring me some sweet French snacks when she goes back to French during the vacation.
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