Butchert Garden
After arriving at the harbor of Swartz Bay, we moved by bus for about 40 minutes and arrived at Butchart gardens. Though it was a walk with the use of an umbrella because of drizzled, the garden was really beautiful. Everywhere was full of flowers and the garden was decorated artistically. We had one and a half hours of free time. However, since the garden was large and we needed to leave time to go to the bathroom and buy souvenirs, we walked around in a hurry while taking pictures.
I noticed after I went to the meeting place at a specified time, that I forgot to take a photo with my 360-degree camera in such a beautiful place. This is almost always the case. When I really want to leave it to my memory, I'm crazy about looking at the landscape and forget to take a picture. It was a shame!
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Butchart Gardens
After arriving at the harbor of (Canadians and locals just say 'Swartz Bay') Swartz Bay, we moved traveled by bus for about 40 minutes and arrived at Butchart gardens. Though it was a we had to walk with the use of an umbrella because of drizzle, the garden was really beautiful. Everywhere was full of flowers and the garden was decorated artistically. We had one and a half hours of free time. However, since the garden was large and we needed to leave time to go to the bathroom and buy souvenirs, we walked around in a hurry while taking pictures.
I noticed after I went to the meeting place at a the specified time, that I had forgot to take a photo with my 360-degree camera in such a this (A little too awkward with 'such a') beautiful place. This is almost always the case. When I really want to leave it to my memory, I'm crazy about looking at the landscape and forget to take a picture. It was a shame!
I've been to Butchart Gardens as well. It's very beautiful.
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Butchert Garden
After arriving at the harbor of Swartz Bay, we moved by bus for about 40 minutes and arrived at Butchart gardens.
[ After arriving at Swatz Bay harbour and travelling by bus for about 40 minutes, we arrived at Butchert gardens.]
Though it was a walk with the use of an umbrella because of drizzled, the garden was really beautiful.
[The garden was really beautiful, although the walk required the use of an umbrella because of the drizzling rain]
Everywhere was full of flowers and the garden was decorated artistically.
[Everywhere was full with flowers and the garden was artistically decorated]
We had one and a half hours of free time. However, since the garden was large and we needed to leave time to go to the bathroom and buy souvenirs, we walked around in a hurry while taking pictures.
[We had one and 1 half hours of free time. However, since the garden was so large and we needed to allow time to go to the bathroom and buy souvenirs, we walked around in a hurry while taking pictures.]
I noticed after I went to the meeting place at a specified time, that I forgot to take a photo with my 360-degree camera in such a beautiful place.
[After I went to the meeting place at the specified time, I noticed that I had forgotten to take photos of this beautiful place with my 360-degree camera]
- You are already at this beautiful place so you know about it - no need to use indefinite article 'a'
- You only notice something after it happens, so put what happened first, then say you noticed you had forgotten.
This is almost always the case.
[This is almost always the case.]
When I really want to leave it to my memory, I'm crazy about looking at the landscape and forget to take a picture. It was a shame!
[I really wanted a way to remember this experience. However, I was so crazed at looking around that I forgot to take a picture. It was a real shame!]
Hope this helps.
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