Hello Alin my name is Sasha I am from Ukraine. I am 16 years old too, i am studying english just like you. first mistakes i have found is in word "foUnd" with letter "u" in a middle or maybe you have just accidantely missed it, yeah next is "in school" it must be with article "the"(in the school). I am not so good at English but we can help each other to improove our skills in this so hard and so impotent thing like English. I advise you to listen to BBC's podcasts ( if you know Ukranian http://www.bbc.co.uk/podcasts/series/ukranianenglish) and watch short video clips in English (http://www.englishlearner.ru/). And please give me your vkontakte ID ^_^ (if you are registered there my is http://vkontakte.ru/hahahahahahahahahah dont worry it's my realy ID;) )

Hi , My name is Ahmed , am frm Egypt and live in Dubai and i wanna be friends