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Adha Eid Today is Arfaa which means tomorrow is Adha Eid for Muslims and non-Muslims we celebrate our eid by going to the family home (Grandparents home) and have the breakfast together, then eat sweets and dates, after that the family getting ready for the sacrifice, a number of sheep sacrificed to be distributed to the poor people and relatives as one of our rituals, my favorite part when my relatives start giving me money as a celebration of this occasion, i usually get like 70$ which is not bad :'D I like how this occasion is simple and have many human meanings! Any correction is welcomed, and I will happy if anyone rewrite it in another way using your terms.

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Adha Eid

Today is Arfaa, which means tomorrow, is Adha Eid for (both) Muslims and non-Muslims.
We celebrate our Eid by going to the / our family home (Grandparents' home). There we have the breakfast together, then eat sweets and dates, after that the family will be getting ready for the sacrifice, a number of sheep are going to be sacrificed to be and distributed to the poor people and relatives as one of our rituals. My favorite part is when my relatives start giving me money as a celebration of on this occasion, I usually get 70$ or so which is not bad :'D
I like how this occasion / festival not only because how simple it is but there're also many human meanings!
Any correction is welcomed, and I will be really happy if anyone rewrites it in another way (by) using your his / her own 'terms'.

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