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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello. I'm rosemary. Nice to meet all who are reading my first entry. I am Japanese and I study at University. The reason why I'm studying English is just it's attracted me:) I like the language itself. Of course I love to communicate with people through English. Unfortunately, my level of English isn't high and it sometimes causes me a struggle about things which I try to talk, write, whatever in English. So I'd like to improve my skill and feel more free to use the language. Thank you very much for having taken time for this. With all my love, Rosemary 09/08/2011

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>Daniel Thank you very much for correcting my mistakes:) I didn't know "With all my love" was such a strong expression. I'm sure l'll carefully choose people to say that from now on! Again, I appreciate to your kindness.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello.
I'm Rosemary. Nice to meet all who are reading my first entry.
I am Japanese and I study at University.

The reason why I'm studying English is just that it has attracted me:)
I like the language itself, and of course I love to communicate with people through English.

Unfortunately, my level of English isn't high and it sometimes causes me to struggle about things which when I try to talk, write, or whatever in English.
So I'd like to improve my skill and feel more free comfortable to use using the language.

Thank you very much for having taken the time to read this.

With all my love [1],

Rosemary 09/08/2011

[1] - "With all my love" is too strong for this context. It is usually only used between closest friends, family or lovers! "With kind regards" would be much better.

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