再见冬天,欢迎春天 (Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring)。
再见冬天,欢迎春天 (Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring)。
（可以说：“你好春天”？听起来很奇怪吗？）
我很久没有写中文小作文。但是今天是一个很特别的一天，我突然有心情写一篇。
在澳大利亚，明天是春天的第一天，太好了。这意思是，今晚，冬天终于会结束了。我真的很开心，我等了很久。我不太喜欢冬天。其实我一点都不喜欢。我觉得冬天太冷也太久。只下午5：30左右，天空已经开始变黑了。要做什么都时间不够。每天要开着热机（heater）。出去的时候，需要穿那么多件衣服，比如毛衣，外套等等。
在春天中，天气更多暖和也舒服. 我们可以穿比较轻的衣服。在澳大利亚，墨尔本,在十二月，日落大概在晚上10：00。因为日落更晚，我们有更多时间做事情。可以更经常跟我妻子出去吃饭。可以去市中心逛逛街。在春天中，我妻子很喜欢做园艺(还是做花园 ?)。她已经准备好了，昨天买了一些花和小水果树。下几天她想种它们。
至于我,因为没有那么冷，感觉更好带宠物狗出去走走。。 我有更多机会跟朋友见面，喝咖啡和聊天。
Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring.
I haven’t written an essay in Chinese for a long time. But today is a special day, I’m suddenly in the mood to write one.
In Australia, tomorrow is the first day of Spring, that's great. This means that tonight, winter will finally come to an end. I'm really happy，I waited for so long. I don't like winter very much. Actually I don't like it at all. I think winter is too cold and too long. At only around 5:30pm, the sky already starts to get dark. There's not enough time to do anything. We need to turn on the heater everyday. When going out, we need to wear so many layers of clothes like sweaters/ jumpers, jackets and more.
In spring, the weather is warmer and more comfortable. We can wear lighter clothes. In Melbourne, Australia, in December, sunset is around 10pm. Because the sunset is later, we have more time to do things. I can eat out with my wife more often. We can go shopping in the city. My wife likes to do gardening in spring. She is already prepared, yesterday she bought some flowering plants and small fruit trees. She intends to plant them in the next few days.
As for me, because it is not so cold, it feels nicer to take our pet dog out for a walk. I have more opportunities to meet friends, have a coffee and catch up.
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You have two corrections already. A lovely piece. My translation :)
Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring. 冬辞春迎
I haven’t written an essay in Chinese for a long time. 很久沒有写中文作文了, But today is a special day, I’m suddenly in the mood to write one. 不过今日特殊, 忽然有雅兴.
In Australia, tomorrow is the first day of Spring, that's great. 明天的澳洲, 是春天的第一天, This means that tonight, winter will finally come to an end. 即今宵冬尽, I'm really happy，心情极乐. I waited for so long. 已期待好久了I don't like winter very much. 我不太喜欢冬节, Actually I don't like it at all. 真心说话, 一点也不喜欢, I think winter is too cold and too long. 我本人认为太寒冷, 也太長久At only around 5:30pm, 下午五点半还沒到, the sky already starts to get dark. 天色已经黑了, There's not enough time to do anything. 时间不足去完成任何事情, We need to turn on the heater everyday. 每天要开着溫气机When going out, 出门時we need to wear so many layers of clothes like sweaters/ jumpers, jackets and more. 也要穿上多层衣服, 如毛衣，外套等等。
In spring, the weather is warmer and more comfortable. 春天时节, 天气溫順舒暢, We can wear lighter clothes. 轻衣可穿 In Melbourne, Australia, in December, sunset is around 10pm. 在墨尔本的十二月, 夕阳晚上十点西下Because the sunset is later, we have more time to do things. 因此万事可成, I can eat out with my wife more often. 常常可以和妻子在外面吃钣, We can go shopping in the city. 也可以在城里逛逛或购买. My wife likes to do gardening in spring. 妻子喜于春天种花种果菜 She is already prepared, 她已准備一切了yesterday she bought some flowering plants and small fruit trees.昨天买了些花和小果树 She intends to plant them in the next few days. 过了几天就下种
As for me, 至于我自己because it is not so cold, 天气还不錯, it feels nicer to take our pet dog out for a walk. 帶着宠狗走走, 总觉得心情愉快. I have more opportunities to meet friends, 也有多机会和朋友会約, have a coffee 喝杯咖啡, and catch up. 八卦闲谈
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再见冬天,欢迎春天 (Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring)。
再见冬天,迎接春天 (Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring)。
（可以说：“你好春天”？听起来很奇怪吗？）
可以用，题目用你好春天更好。
我很久没有写中文小作文。但是今天是一个很特别的一天，我突然有心情写一篇。
在澳大利亚，明天是春季的第一天，太好了。这意思是，在今晚，冬季终于要结束了。我真的很开心，这一天我等了很久。我不太喜欢冬天，真的一点都不喜欢。我觉得冬天太冷时间也太久。只要一到下午5：30左右，天空就已经开始慢慢变黑了。做什么事情时间都不够。每天要开着热机（heater），出去的时候，需要穿许多件衣服，比如毛衣、外套等等。
在春天，天气更多暖和也很舒服. 我们可以穿比较轻便的衣服。在十二月的澳大利亚墨尔本,日落大概在晚上10：00。因为日落更晚，我们有充足的时间做事情。可以经常跟我妻子出去吃饭。可以去市中心逛逛街。在春天，我妻子很喜欢做园艺（这样写就行）(还是做花园 ?)。她已经准备好了，昨天买了一些花和小水果树。想过几天把它们种在花园里。
至于我，是因为春天没有那么冷，可以更好的带宠物狗出去走走。 有更多机会跟朋友见面，喝咖啡和聊天。
中文非常棒！
Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring.
I haven’t written an essay in Chinese for a long time. But today is a special day, I’m suddenly in the mood to write one.
In Australia, tomorrow is the first day of Spring, that's great. This means that tonight, winter will finally come to an end. I'm really happy，I waited for so long. I don't like winter very much. Actually I don't like it at all. I think winter is too cold and too long. At only around 5:30pm, the sky already starts to get dark. There's not enough time to do anything. We need to turn on the heater everyday. When going out, we need to wear so many layers of clothes like sweaters/ jumpers, jackets and more.
In spring, the weather is warmer and more comfortable. We can wear lighter clothes. In Melbourne, Australia, in December, sunset is around 10pm. Because the sunset is later, we have more time to do things. I can eat out with my wife more often. We can go shopping in the city. My wife likes to do gardening in spring. She is already prepared, yesterday she bought some flowering plants and small fruit trees. She intends to plant them in the next few days.
As for me, because it is not so cold, it feels nicer to take our pet dog out for a walk. I have more opportunities to meet friends, have a coffee and catch up.
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再见冬天,欢迎春天 (Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring)。
再见冬天,欢迎春天 (Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring)。
（可以说：“你好春天”？听起来很奇怪吗？）可以说“你好春天”
我很久没有写中文小作文。但是今天是一个很特别的一天，我突然有心情写一篇。
在澳大利亚，明天是春天的第一天，太好了。这意思是，今晚，冬天终于会结束了。我真的很开心，我等了很久。我不太喜欢冬天。其实我一点都不喜欢。我觉得冬天太冷也太久 长了。只 大概下午5：30左右，天空已经开始变黑了。要做什么都时间不够。每天要开着热机 暖气（heater）。出去的时候，需要穿那么多件衣服，比如毛衣，外套等等。
在春天中，天气更多暖和也舒服. 我们可以穿比较轻 薄的衣服。在澳大利亚墨尔本的十二月，，墨尔本,在十二月，日落大概在晚上10：00。因为日落更晚，我们有更多时间做事情。可以更经常跟我妻子出去吃饭。可以去市中心逛逛街。在春天中，我妻子很喜欢做园艺(还是做花园 ?)“园艺”这个词更好。她已经准备好了，昨天买了一些花和小水果树。下 接下来几天她想种它们。
至于我,因为没有那么冷，感觉更好 可以带宠物狗出去走走。。 我有更多机会跟朋友见面，喝咖啡和聊天。
Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring.
I haven’t written an essay in Chinese for a long time. But today is a special day, I’m suddenly in the mood to write one.
In Australia, tomorrow is the first day of Spring, that's great. This means that tonight, winter will finally come to an end. I'm really happy，I waited for so long. I don't like winter very much. Actually I don't like it at all. I think winter is too cold and too long. At only around 5:30pm, the sky already starts to get dark. There's not enough time to do anything. We need to turn on the heater everyday. When going out, we need to wear so many layers of clothes like sweaters/ jumpers, jackets and more.
In spring, the weather is warmer and more comfortable. We can wear lighter clothes. In Melbourne, Australia, in December, sunset is around 10pm. Because the sunset is later, we have more time to do things. I can eat out with my wife more often. We can go shopping in the city. My wife likes to do gardening in spring. She is already prepared, yesterday she bought some flowering plants and small fruit trees. She intends to plant them in the next few days.
As for me, because it is not so cold, it feels nicer to take our pet dog out for a walk. I have more opportunities to meet friends, have a coffee and catch up.
你的小作文很棒！
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再见冬天,欢迎春天 (Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring)。
再见冬天,欢迎春天 (Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring)。
（可以说：“你好春天”？听起来很奇怪吗？）你好春天会更好
我很久没有写中文小作文。但是今天是一个很特别的一天，我突然有心情写一篇。
在澳大利亚，明天是春天的第一天，太好了。这意思是，今晚，冬天终于结束了。我真的很开心，我等了很久。我不太喜欢冬天，一点都不喜欢。我觉得冬天太冷也太久。下午5：30左右，天空已经开始变黑了。要做什么都时间不够。每天要开着热机（heater）。出去的时候，需要穿那么多件衣服，比如毛衣，外套等等。
在春天中，天气更暖和也舒服. 我们可以穿比较轻的衣服。在澳大利亚，墨尔本,在十二月，日落大概在晚上10：00。因为日落更晚，我们有更多时间做事情。可以更经常跟我妻子出去吃饭。可以去市中心逛逛街。在春天中，我妻子很喜欢做园艺(还是做花园 ?)。她已经准备好了，昨天买了一些花和小水果树。再过几天她想种它们。
至于我,因为没有那么冷，感觉更好带宠物狗出去走走。。 我有更多机会跟朋友见面，喝咖啡和聊天。
Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring.
I haven’t written an essay in Chinese for a long time. But today is a special day, I’m suddenly in the mood to write one.
In Australia, tomorrow is the first day of Spring, that's great. This means that tonight, winter will finally come to an end. I'm really happy，I waited for so long. I don't like winter very much. Actually I don't like it at all. I think winter is too cold and too long. At only around 5:30pm, the sky already starts to get dark. There's not enough time to do anything. We need to turn on the heater everyday. When going out, we need to wear so many layers of clothes like sweaters/ jumpers, jackets and more.
In spring, the weather is warmer and more comfortable. We can wear lighter clothes. In Melbourne, Australia, in December, sunset is around 10pm. Because the sunset is later, we have more time to do things. I can eat out with my wife more often. We can go shopping in the city. My wife likes to do gardening in spring. She is already prepared, yesterday she bought some flowering plants and small fruit trees. She intends to plant them in the next few days.
As for me, because it is not so cold, it feels nicer to take our pet dog out for a walk. I have more opportunities to meet friends, have a coffee and catch up.
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@彭方文, thanks for pointing that out. Much appreciated.
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