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A lack of confidence Yesterday at the office, a young intern who had finished her training period, talked to me that she had a lack of confidence. So I explained to reassure her that it isn't always a negative thing. Indeed, I think that a person who lack of confidence, by fear of being judged, will be more intent on doing his work correctly, and will try to do his best. On the contrary, a person too confident could overestimate his skills and rush his job. Lack or excess of confidence could be disastrous, we should find a balance.

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Hi Sandrine,

Here are some corrections to your writing:

Yesterday at the office, a young intern who had finished her training period, talked to told me that she had a lack of lacked confidence.
So I explained to reassure her to reassure her, I explained that it isn't always a negative thing. Indeed, I think that a person who lack of lacks confidence, by for fear of being judged, will be more intent on doing his their work correctly, and will try to do his their best.
On the contrary By contrast, a person too confident could overestimate his their skills and rush his their job.
Lack or Both lack as well as excess of confidence could can be disastrous, we should find a balance.

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The ones in yellow are suggestions - using a so-called "singular they" when talking about a hypothetical person is seen as a more inclusive choice as it does not assume that the person is male. However, grammatically it's not a problem to use "he" in this case either, they way you did.

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