It happens
Today wasn't a bad day, but I'm still a bit frustrated.
A few days ago I had cought a light cold and this morning I woke up, my voice sounding like a roar. I drank a cup of hot tea thinking that it would help to smoothe my throat. I work as a teacher so it was important to me to solve this problem as quickly as possible. I took some pills hoping that during my trip in metro I would feel better. But when I came to school, I realised that I had no voice at all! My colleagues adviced me to go back home ,cause there was no sense to give lessons wispering. Maybe I wouldn't had been so sad if it wasn't my second day in this new school. I didn't get to know all my students yet. I took a not paid day-off and now I think if it's enough or not to get my voice back.
I'll appreciate your corrections. Thank you.
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It happens
Today wasn't a bad day, but I'm still a bit frustrated.
A few days ago I had cought caught a light cold and this morning I woke up, my voice sounding sounded like a roar. I drank a cup of hot tea thinking that it would help to smoothe soothe my throat. I work as a teacher so it was important to me to solve this problem as quickly as possible. I took some pills hoping that during my trip in on the metro I would feel better. But when I came to arrived at school, I realised that I had no voice at all! My colleagues adviced advised me to go back home ,cause because there was no sense to give giving lessons wispering whispering. Maybe I wouldn't had have been so sad if it wasn't my second day in this new school. I didn't haven’t get gotten to know all my students yet. I took a not paid unpaid day-off and now I think wonder if it's enough or not to get my voice back.
I'll appreciate your corrections. Thank you.
Pretty good! Your mistakes were fairly subtle ones.
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