Let's go this long way with each other! I know that I have a long way for learning English but I will try to do my best this time.I tried to learn English may times but I gave up every time because I

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Let's go this long way with each other! I know that I have a long way for learning English but I will try to do my best this time.I tried to learn English may times but I gave up every time because I forgot my purpose of learning. Any language is a new world of beauty, traditions, culture and etc. Thus, I want to learn English for entering to this new world. I try to find a good method for learning, therefore, I watch many YouTube videos and read many articles about language learning. I don't know how many mistakes I have in this note but I am happy for my starting because I know these mistakes will be corrected as soon as possible. I hope you can help me correct these mistakes :)

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Let's Go on This Long Journey Together!

I know that I still have a long way to go in learning English, but I will try to do my best this time. I had tried to learn English many times before, but I gave up every single time whenever I forgot my exact purpose for learning it. Any language opens up a completely new world of beauty, traditions, culture, etc., and in order to enter the world of English, I know I need to learn it fluently. By watching many YouTube videos, and by reading many articles regarding learning languages, I had hoped to find good methods for learning it. Both of those activities have been not only helpful, but also entertaining, and I will continue doing them. I honestly do not know how many mistakes, if any, that I might have in this short note, but I am still very happy about writing and posting it--I know someone here will soon correct them. If you read this, I hope that you will help me!

Hi, Mary. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. Sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. J.

Let's go this long way with each other!

I know that I have a long way to go regarding my ~~for learning~~ English, but I will try to do my best this time.I tried to learn English many times but I gave up every time because I forgot my purpose of for learning.

Any language is a new world of beauty, traditions, culture ~~and~~ etc. Thus, I want to learn English for entering into this new world.

I try to find a good method for learning, therefore, I watch many YouTube videos and read many articles about language learning.

I don't know how many mistakes I have in this note but I am happy ~~for my starting~~ to try because I know these mistakes will be corrected as soon as possible. Please help ~~me for~~ by ~~correction~~ correcting this :)

Well done. This is only my suggested correction. I hope it helps. All the best.

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