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TV show Scrubs
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My favorite serial is Scrubs. I watched it first when I went to school. It was broadcast on MTV channel which I watched pretty often. Scrubs is just an amazing sitcom. This sitcom is showed from the main character view - John Dorian or just JD, so he commented the things which is going on by his voice behind the scene. There is a perfect harmony between drama and comedy in this serial which I have never seen in anywhere else in different shows. You know, usually it is just comedy or just drama. But I love Scrubs exactly because of this unusual harmony. The each episode of the show is just about twenty minutes and in these twenty minutes you laugh, you cry, you actually live your life in the hospital with characters.
The characters of the Scrubs just live their lives working in the hospital. This show shows their usual lives, how they live, love, quarrel and make up, and how they grow over time.
JD is the main character. He is a very funny, a little bit clumsy, kind and thoughful man. He is just an intern and in the very first episode he met a Janitor who pranks on JD during the whole show. JD has the best friend Turk and their friendship is just the best thing I have ever seen.It is just the perfect friendship because they love each other, they both are funny and support each other all the time.
In the hospital JD has a mentor - doctor Cox, who is an attending physician. He always criticizes and calls JD female names, but anyway JD likes him.
Bob Kelso is the cheif of the hospital. At the first sight he is a selfish and mean person, he seems like he concerns only about money and patient's insurances. But after he retires people found out that he is a kind man and his meanness was a means of coping with the years of hard decisions at the hospital.
And of course there are main girl characters like Elliot - another iterm which JD has romantic relationship several times. She has a bit neurotic and that's why it is difficult to her to have long-turn relationship. Another girl character in this show is Carla - a nurse at the hospital. She is stubborn and self-confident and continually caring, acting as a mother to another characters.
Even though this show can be seem a bit old since it was first broadcast in 2001, but it will never be old in my heart. I think that even after thirty years I will rewatch this show and still love it.
2019년 10월 8일 오후 1:25
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TV show "Scrubs"
Correct my mistakes please!
My favorite series is "Scrubs". I first watched it when I <s>went to </s>was in school [which school? high school? college?]. It was broadcast on the MTV channel which I watched pretty often. "Scrubs" is just an amazing sitcom. <s>This sitcom</s> It is shown from the main character's point of view, John Dorian or just JD, so he comments on the things <s>which is</s> that are going on in the scene by voiceover behind. There is the perfect harmony between drama and comedy in this series which I have never seen <s>in</s> anywhere else in different shows. You know, usually, it is just comedy or just drama. But I love "Scrubs" exactly because of this unusual harmony. <s>The</s> Each episode of the show is <s>just</s> about twenty minutes and in these twenty minutes you laugh, you cry, you actually live your life in the hospital with the characters.
The characters of <s>the</s> "Scrubs" <s>just</s> live their lives working in the hospital. This show shows their <s>usual</s> daily lives, how they live, love, quarrel and make up, and how they grow over time.
JD is the main character. He is a very funny, kind and thoughtful man, and a little bit clumsy. He is just an intern and in the very first episode he meets a janitor who pranks on JD during the whole show. JD has a best friend, Turk,[I'm assuming this is not the same person as the janitor] and their friendship is just the best thing I have ever seen. It is <s>just</s> the perfect friendship because they love each other, they are both funny, and they support each other all the time.
In the hospital JD has a mentor, Doctor Cox, who is an attending physician. He always criticizes and calls JD female names, but JD likes him anyway.
Bob Kelso is the chief of the hospital [Chief of Staff]. At <s>the</s> first sight he is a selfish and mean person because he seems <s>like he</s> to only be concerned about money and patient insurance. But after he retires people <s>found</s> find out that he is a kind man and his meanness was a means of coping with the years of hard decisions at the hospital.
And of course there are main girl characters like Elliot, another intern <s>which</s> who has a romantic relationship with JD several times. She <s>has</s>is a bit neurotic and that's why it is difficult to her to have long-term relationships. Another girl character in this show is Carla, a nurse at the hospital. She is stubborn, self-confident, <s>and</s> <s>continually</s> always caring, and acts <s>as</s> like a mother to <s>an</s>other characters.
Even though this show can <s>be</s> seem a bit old since it was first broadcast in 2001, <s>but</s> it will never be old in my heart. I think that even after thirty years I will rewatch this show and still love it.
[Well done! Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.]
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