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The raging blaze in Australia still concern people all over the world. Reportedly, in the state of New South Wales, three years of drought has made the bush in the area all dramatically dry and easy to catch fire. As a result of that, the blaze is hard to be stopped from spreading.
As the winds bring the fires closer to local residents' home, they have not any other way but arrange their belongings and flee to coasts with their family. The purpose is just to get some fresh air. But the fires are still following them. The local government have been making most efforts to restrict even put out the blaze by deploying military aircraft and vessels to back the rescue.
At last, the emergency is naturally attributed to globel warm. From my view it would be a difficulty hard to overcome for human being for sure, should not all human do the best to change it. Hope for the blaze could be put out as soon as possible.
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The raging blaze in Australia still concerns people all over the world. It is reported that, in the state of New South Wales, three years of drought has made the bushes in the area all dramatically dry and easy to catch fire. As a result , the blaze is hard to stop from spreading.
As the winds bring the fires closer to local residents' home, they have no choice but to arrange their belongings and flee to coasts with their family. The purpose is just to get some fresh air. But the fires are still following them. The local government has been making efforts to put out the blaze by deploying military aircraft and vessels to back the rescue.
At last, the emergency is naturally attributed to globel warm. From my view it would be a struggle for human being for sure could not all human do the best to change it. Hope for the blaze could be put out as soon as possible.
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