Working in team sometime is kind of overwhelming.
Sometimes to work in team is kind of overwhelming when everyone is not striving hard just like the other ones who really do. I really love to work in team because I learn from others and that´s awesome. I think I am a good leader, however I never stop learning. I need to improve every day so I cannot hesitate about my decisions. The issue comes when someone do not want to do their duties. It is exhausted when I have to insist them to do their tasks. And at that ponit I realize what kind of people I wanna work with for the next time. But at the end of the day, I know I'll learn something good about those things.
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Teamwork Is Sometimes Frustrating
Sometimes to work as part of a team is somewhat frustrating when someone fails to strive as hard as the other members are. However, I really love to work in a team because I often learn things from others, such as seeing the problem from a different perspective, or how they assigned tasks based on a team member’s personality, and that experience is priceless! Although I think I have good leadership skills already, I hope that I will never stop learning. I feel the need to improve myself every day, so that I am confident about my decisions. Unfortunately, issues come whenever someone does not want to do his or her duties. It is exhausting for me when I have stop whatever I am doing merely to insist that they do their tasks. It is at that point when I realize exactly what kind of person I do not want to work with during the next time. Regardless, at the end of the day, I realize that in dealing with such people, that I have learned something positive from the interaction, as it not only improves how I deal with this issue, but also improves myself in the process.*
Hi, Alberto. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. My sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.
*I think the word, "frustrating," is more appropriate here, as you are only dealing with one member of the team. If it were half or more, then, trying to get them all to do their tasks would be overwhelming. The word, awesome, as used in your post, is slang, and thus, should be avoided. Finally, watch your spelling or proofread your work since a few simple errors could have been avoided.
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Working in a team sometimes is kind of overwhelming.
Sometimes to work in a team is kind of overwhelming when everyone is not striving as hard just like as the others ones who really do. I really love to work in a team because I learn from others and that is awesome. I think I am a good leader, however and I never stop learning. I need to improve every day, so I cannot hesitate about regarding my decisions. The issue comes when someone does not want to do their duties. It is exhausting when I have to insist them to that they do their tasks. And At that point I realized what kind of people I wanna want to work with for the next time. But at the end of the day, I know I'll learn something good about these things.
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