Xiaohong
A letter to my friend
Dear lily，
Next saturday is my birthday.I am going to have a party and celebrate my birthday at eight o'clock. I want you to come too .First you can take the No. bus and get off the bus at Bank of Jiaxing and the then you can go along the Xingqiao Road .You will see an red house on the left of the road in five minutes.I will wait for you.
Yours，
Li Hua
2020년 3월 22일 오후 12:42
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A letter to my friend
Dear Lily，
Next Saturday is my birthday. I am going to have a party and celebrate my birthday at eight o'clock. I want you to come too . First you can take the No. [ ] bus and get off the bus at Bank of Jiaxing, and the then you can go along the Xingqiao Road . You will see an red house on the left of the road in/after five minutes.I will be waiting for you.
Yours，
Li Hua
2020년 3월 22일
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A letter to my friend [ / A letter to a friend / A letter to a friend of mine (assuming you have more than one friend) ]
Dear Lily，
Next Saturday is my birthday. I am going to have a party and celebrate my birthday at eight o'clock pm. I want you to come [ / I want you to be there too]. First you'll need take the No.--- bus and get off at Bank of Jiaxing and the then you can go on Xingqiao Road. You will see a red house on the left side of the road after five minutes. I will wait [ / be waiting ] for you.
Yours，
Li Hua
2020년 3월 22일
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