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When all this started, I thought I couldn't stand staying at home in isolation for too much time....and, frankly, I still do. I'm starting to miss so many things and I even can't bear the idea of not doing many things for a long time still. Moreover, I'm not the kind of person who thinks I have to take advantage from some free time. I mean, I used to follow different interests/tasks in my daily routine, so I don't sense that I have (neither "need") to dedicate myself to something I usually don't dedicate myself to. I'm just carrying out all my duties and interests at a calmer pace, as I used to conduct my daily life in a quite frantic way.
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When all this started, I thought I couldn't wouldn't be able to stand staying at home in isolation for too much time....and, frankly, I still do can't. I'm starting to miss so many things and I even can't bear the idea of not doing many things for a long time still. Moreover, I'm not the kind of person who thinks I have to take advantage from of some free time. I mean, I used to follow different interests/tasks in my daily routine, so I don't sense feel that I have (neither "need") to dedicate myself to something I usually don't usually dedicate myself to. I'm just carrying out all my duties and interests at a calmer pace, as I used to conduct my daily life in a quite frantic way.
Brava! It's very well written and easily understandable. I would use the conditional ("wouldn't be able to" rather than just "couldn't" ) after 'I thought'. And we use 'feel' more than 'sense' when talking about ourselves (eg, I feel sad, I feel obliged to do something, I felt it was necessary, I feel that you're not telling me everything, etc.)
Well done!
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When all this started, I thought I couldn't stand staying at home in isolation for too [much time]/long....and, frankly, I still do. I'm starting to miss so many things and I even can't bear the idea of not doing many things for a long time (still). Moreover, I'm not the kind of person who thinks I have to take advantage from of some free time. I mean, I used to follow different interests/tasks in my daily routine, so I don't sense that I have (neither or "need") to dedicate/commit myself to something I usually don't do /[dedicate myself to]. I'm just carrying out all my duties and interests at a calmer/more relaxed pace, as I used to conduct my daily life in a quite frantic way.
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