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Emily.K
What job would you like to have after university?why? (Schools h.w.)
I would like to work in the airport as a person at information center. I have two reasons why I want to work like that. First, I like to talk with people. Moreover if I have a chance,I hope to have a conversation with foreigners in he/she own languages. Second,when I had gone abroad,there is a lot of gentle people who tell me the way. So I want to be like them. These are the reasons why I would like to work in the airport as a person at information center.
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2020년 5월 4일 오전 10:12
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What job would you like to <s>have</s> do after university? <s>w</s>hy? Why?
I would like to work in the airport <s>as a person</s> at the Information Center. I have two reasons why I would like <s>want</s> to work <s>like that</s> there. First, I like to talk <s>with</s> to people. Moreover if I <s>have a</s> get the chance, I hope to have <s>a</s> conversation with foreigners in <s>he/she</s> their own languages. <s>Second</s> Secondly,when I had gone abroad,there <s>is</s> was a lot of <s>gentle</s> kind people who <s>tell</s> showed me the way. <s>So </s>I want to be like them. These are <s>the</s> my reasons why I would like to work in the airport as a person at the Information Center.
2020년 5월 4일
What job would you like to have after university?why? (Schools h.w.)
I would like to work in the airport as a person (you can also use the word: clerk, which is more specific as a person who works in an office and has to talk to clients and help them out) at the information center. I have two reasons why I want to <s>work like that</s> have such a job (or you can simply continue your previous sentence by saying: work as a clerk for two reasons.) First, I like to talk with people. Moreover if I have a chance,I hope to have a conversation with foreigners in <s>he/she</s> their own languages. Secondly, when I <s>had gone</s> (depending whether this is a general statement or it is about a particular trip that you took in the past you can use go/went) go/went abroad,there <s>is</s> (for people the verb should be plural; also, you need to adjust this verb with the previous sentence: are/were) a lot of gentle people who tell (or told) me the way (the way to what? Maybe you can simply say: there are a lot of people who help me out). So I want to be like them. These are the reasons why I would like to work in an airport as a person/clerk at the information center.
2020년 5월 4일
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