Historical buildings
My view is that historical buildings should be preserved.
One of the reasons is that historical sites can be visited by people, which can enrich people's spiritual world. For instance, visiting the Forbidden city was an amazing experience, which made me feel connect to our history. And walking around the houses constructed thousands of years ago got me thinking about what the world was liked at that time.
Another contributing factors is that historical buildings play a significant role of cities' identity. They are often landmarks of cities, like Big Ben in London and the Temple of Haven in Beijing. Without these buildings, most cities would look pretty much the same.
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Historical buildings
My view is that historical buildings should be preserved.
One of the reasons is that historical sites can be visited by people, which can enrich people's spiritual world. For instance, visiting the Forbidden city was an amazing experience, which made me feel connect(ed) to our (our sounds like human history, but also your history as a person. you should avoid dicothomy) history. And walking around the houses constructed thousands of years ago got me thinking about what the world was liked at that time.
Another contributing factors is that historical buildings play a significant role of (in/when it comes to) cities' identity(ies). They are often landmarks of cities (city landmarks), like (the) Big Ben in London and the Temple of Haven in Beijing. Without these buildings, most cities would look pretty much the same.
Overall, it's pretty nice! Sounds like an IELTS composition, but shortened. If that's the case, you should try to write an introduction stating your general thoughts on the subject more clearly!
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Historical buildings
My view is that historical buildings should be preserved. One reason is that these historical sites offer an enriching, spiritually enhancing experience when people visit them. For instance, visiting the Forbidden city was an amazing experience for me. I felt more connected to our history as I walked around and looked at houses constructed thousands of years ago. It got me thinking about what the world was like back then. Another reason for preservation is that historical buildings play a significant role in a city’s identity. They are often historical landmarks like Big Ben in London and the Temple of Haven in Beijing. Without these buildings, most cities would look pretty much the same.
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Historical buildings
My view is that historical buildings should be preserved.
One of the reasons is that historical sites can be visited by people, which can enrich people's spiritual world world-view (yours is not incorrect, the correction is just a more typical way of saying it). For instance, visiting the Forbidden city was an amazing experience, which made me feel connected to our history. And walking around the houses that were constructed thousands of years ago got me thinking about what the world was liked at that time.
Another contributing factors is that historical buildings play a significant role of in cities' identity. They are often landmarks of cities, like Big Ben in London and the Temple of Haven in Beijing. Without these buildings, most cities would look pretty much the same.
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