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Coconut
I once spent the whole winter in Southern Thailand. It was a wonderful. This period of my life filled with interesting events. In this essay, I would like to talk about coconut.
I spent this winter in a place where coconut palms grow wild, anyone can pick up coconuts completely free. I did so and found that coconut has a number of useful properties.
Firstly, coconut detoxes the body. The fact is the coconut pulp is rich in plant fibers. Thanks for them, coconut in a special way affects the intestinal wall removing toxins from it. This is the kind of brush to cleanse the body.
Secondly, coconut is very nutritious. All 4 months I ate mainly coconut pulp and boiled rice and felt great.
Thirdly, coconut is delicious. You can cook a huge number of different coconut dishes. For example, fried coconut, coconut milk, different types of desserts.
But there is one more delicate moment. I picked up coconuts in the forest and ate them for a long time. As a result, I felt a deep connection with the place where I stayed. That's hard to explain, but I felt myself like a part of this place. If you buy coconuts in the market you don't feel this.
I like coconut very much. If I lived in Southern Thailand I would only eat coconut!
2020년 5월 28일 오전 4:51
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Coconut
I once spent the whole winter in Southern Thailand. It was a wonderful. This period of my life WAS filled with interesting events. In this essay, I would like to talk about coconutS.
I spent this winter in a place where coconut PALM TREES grow wild. Anyone can pick up coconuts completely FOR free. I did so and found that coconutS haVE a number of useful properties.
FIRST (<em>we rarely say "firstly")</em>, coconutS DETOX the body. The fact is THAT <em style="color: rgb(187, 187, 187);"><s>the</s></em> coconut pulp is rich in plant fibers. Thanks TO them, coconutS AFFECT the intestinal wall IN A SPECIAL WAY BY removing toxins. This is A kind of brush to cleanse the body.
Secondly, coconutS ARE very nutritious. All 4 months I ate mainly coconut pulp and boiled rice and felt great.
Thirdly, coconutS ARE delicious. You can cook a huge number of different coconut dishes. For example, fried coconut, coconut milk, AND different types of desserts.
But there is one more delicate moment I WANT TO TALK ABOUT (<em>sounds incomplete without this second part</em>). I picked up coconuts in the forest and ate them for a long time. As a result, I felt a deep connection TO the place where I stayed. That's hard to explain, but I felt like I WAS a part of this place. If you buy coconuts in the market you don't feel THE SAME WAY.
I like coconutS very much. If I lived in Southern Thailand I would only eat coconutS!
<em>You often write "coconut" in the singular. When you talk about coconuts in general (I like coconuts), you need to use the plural "coconuts." You now make me want to try coconuts!</em>
2020년 5월 28일
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