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Joey
Beijing’s winter
As you know, Beijing is located in northern China. As a result, the climate is quite chilly in winter. Beijing’s winter is cold and dry. Usually, January and February are the coldest months of the year. The temperature could get below 10 degrees on the coldest day.
Fortunately, we have heating in every room. And I really think that global warming has had an effect on the weather. It’s not as cold as it used to be.
We haven’t had heavy snow anymore. Which is good for me, because I’m afraid of cold. I usually wear a lot in winter.
2020년 6월 25일 오전 4:31
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Beijing’s winter
As you know, Beijing is located in northern China. As a result, the climate is quite chilly in winter. Beijing’s winter is cold and dry. Usually, January and February are the coldest months of the year. The temperature can/could get below 10 degrees on the coldest day.
Fortunately, we have heating in every room. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">And</s> I really think that global warming has had an effect on the weather. It’s not as cold as it used to be.
We haven’t had heavy snow anymore, w<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">W</s>hich is good for me, because I’m afraid of the cold. I usually wear a lot of layers to shield myself from the cold in winter.
:)
2020년 6월 25일
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Beijing’s winter
As you know, Beijing is located in northern China. As a result, the climate is quite chilly in winter. Beijing’s winter is cold and dry. Usually, January and February are the coldest months of the year. The temperature <s>could</s> can get below 10 degrees on the coldest day.
Fortunately, we have heating in every room. <s>And</s> I really think that global warming has had an effect on the weather. It’s not as cold as it used to be.
We <s>haven’t had</s> don't get heavy snow anymore. Which is good for me, because I’m afraid of the cold. I usually wear a lot in winter.
Very well written.
2020년 6월 25일
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