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A Very Dear Cat
Mrs. Ramsay received an anonymous letter three days after her cat Rastus’ disappearance. The kidnapper demanded 1000 pounds for the return of the cat. She would never see Rastus if she went to the police. She was instructed to place the money in a cardboard box and put it oust side her door. She withdrew 1000 pounds from her bank and acted on the kidnapper’s instructions. The money had disappeared the following morning and Rastus was returned at seven o’clock that evening.
2011년 8월 31일 오전 12:24
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2015년 2월 20일
A small grammatical point: I think Rastus' should be Rastus's, because it is not plural.
2011년 9월 2일
A Very Dear Cat
Mrs. Ramsay received an anonymous letter three days after her cat Rastus’ disappearance. The kidnapper demanded 1000 pounds for the return of the cat. She would never see Rastus if she went to the police. She was instructed to place the money in a cardboard box and put it outside her door. She withdrew 1000 pounds from her bank and acted on the kidnapper’s instructions. The money had disappeared the following morning and Rastus was returned at seven o’clock that evening.
Just one word that needed correcting, looks like a typing mistake.
Nice, short sentences are great! People love commas too much, but not you. :-)
2011년 8월 31일
"Dear" has a double meaning in British English, did you know that? It means both beloved and expensive, both of which apply to this cat I think!
2011년 8월 31일
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