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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello everyone I am a senior in college graduates this year, my major is print ads, now own a tutorial, I hope to make some friends they learn English better, and Oh, I also want to make some of the quietest on through here, because in preparing for the postgraduate entrance examination

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"Hello everyone. I am a senior in college and I graduates this year. My major is print ads. I also own a tutorial.  I hope to make some friends here and would like learn English better with them. And oh, I also don't want to be disturbed too much because I am preparing for the postgraduate entrance examination."

Good introduction. Although there are some errors. I tried to correct based on my understanding of what you wrote. I couldn't fully comprehend what you meant by '..now own a tutorial..' and 'want to make some of the quietest on through here..'. 

Good luck with your entrance exams. Best regards. 

 

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