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LuchiNkj's notebook entry: Jul 11, 2010 // My dream or my family and my passion? A couple days ago... i had a conversation with my parents about what i want to do with my life... i am thinking about that and finally i have 2 options... the first, go to study to usa (3D Art is my dream) probably i will go alone or the second, stay in my country for study another career that don't like me... but i can see my family and friends when i want it and play my favorite cybersport(my passion).... My mom give her support but my father has doubts about this career. What should i do? If i have mistakes, correct me!

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LuchiNkj's notebook entry: Jul 11, 2010 // My dream or my family and my passion?

A couple of days ago... I had a conversation with my parents about what I'm going to do with my life. I have been thinking about it and finally realized that I have 2 options. First, go to study to USA (3D Art).  I'll probably go there alone or second, stay in Korean and study another career that I might not like. But, if I choose the second, then  I can see my family and friends when I want it and continue to play my passion (my favorite cybersport).... My mom gave her support but my father has doubts about this career. < which career?  You need to say which one here.

What should I do?   ................... Well, the first thing you should do is study capitalization.  "i" alone is always capitalized. Also, the first letter of every sentence is capitalized. 

If i have mistakes, correct me! <<< Can you correct your capitalization here now?  I think you can!


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Capitalization Rules Capitalization Rules Capitalize the first word of a sentence Capitalize the pronoun "I" Capitalize proper nouns : persons, places / things, names of people • Capitalize North, South, East, and West when contained in the name of a place (state, country, etc.) but not when used for giving directions. Capitalize days of the week, holidays, and months of the year. Do not capitalize seasons. Capitalize countries, languages, and nationalities (adjective form of a specific country) Capitalize titles that come before names. Do not capitalize titles that follow names. Capitalize letter salutations (openings) and closings Capitalize the first word in a quote. Capitalize content words in titles. Capitalize the first word in each line of poetry
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thank you dears friends :)
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I agree with both comments. Life is short, Live it to the fullest! Follow your heart and good luck with whatever you decide :)
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I also agree with Lena, and I need to add: Sometimes life gives you opportunities too good to pass up, and you must seize them while you can. You may not always have the opportunity to go the the US and study, and if you stay where you are and are unhappy, even with your family and friends around you, you will come to regret it, you never know what could have been. Your family will always be there for you, no matter how far away, and if your passion is truly your passion then it too will remain in your life. But you will also discover new passions and new joys in life. Why not take the chance and enjoy everything that comes with it :)

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