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It is suuny day today Today is sunny. it finally turns well. it is cloudy last few days.it reflect my mood.but i am happy now.the weather like this is fit for playing outdoor.hehe. my frends clibmed the Xiang mountain last weekend.it is a pity that i did not go there.beacuse i went to go Water Great Wall with my colleague.and our company prepared a lot of things for us:apple\chestnut and He tao.t like to eat them. the second day i boiled the chestnut send the people who did not go there with us.they said the chestnut which i boiled are delicous.i felt blessness very much. Share is a exhilaration thing. I want to improve my English from now on.hope anyone help me.collect my mistakes. thank you
2011년 10월 25일 오전 2:49
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It is a sunny day today

Today's weather is sunny. It The weather finally turns well improves. It is was cloudy for the past few days, and it reflected on my mood, but i am happy now, as the weather like this is fit for playing outdoorsHehe.
My friends climbed the Xiang mountain last weekend, and it is was a pity that i did not go there. beacuse I went to go Water Great Wall with my colleague, and our company prepared a lot of things for us to eat, like apples, chestnuts and He tao. I like to eat them (Note: Specify what you like to eat, for example, 'I like to eat apples.' or 'I like to eat chestnuts.').
On the second day, I boiled the some chestnuts and send sent them to the people who did not go there to Water Great Wall with us, and they said that the chestnuts which I boiled are were delicious. I felt blessness very much blessed

Share Sharing is an exhilaration exhilarating thing. 

I want to improve my English from now on. I hope anyone some people will help me collect with my mistakes.
Thank you.

 

(Note: Your vocabulary isn't that bad, but your weaknesses are your grammar and the punctuation. Spelling may also be a problem if not corrected. Overall, I think this will get a B- or a B. Hope this helped! I wish you good luck in learning English, and remember that practice makes perfect!  失败是成功之母!加油!\(^o^)/ )

2011년 10월 26일
but beijing is grey sky
2011년 10월 26일
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