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First notebook entry: Introducing myself My name is AOI. I am studying English at school. I want to study English,because I want to go to Canada and America .

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Good luck with your English. Canada is a great place to visit!
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i'm smallville ...wanna make friends with you ...i think we can help each other ...my english is pretty good and i'm very interested in japanese..thank you
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どうぞうよろしくAoiさん。 僕は日本語を勉強するので、日本に行くつもりです。 僕の名前はEliです。
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is AOI.
I am studying English at school.
I want to study English,because I want to go to Canada and
America .

 

Correction:

I want to study English,SPACE_because I want to go to Canada and America.

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My name is Aoi. I am studying English at school. I want to study English, because I want to go to Canada and America .

Only spacing mainly needs correction. ^_^ 

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