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When teaching and learning become the only way to survive At present,many graduates feel job is the only way to survive.Though we don't favorate the job,we haven't encourage to quit.The scocial is cruel,we shall beat the job.

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When teaching and learning become the only way to survive

At present Currently, many graduates feel that having a job is the only way to survive.Though we don't favorate favour the job,we haven't got enough encourage to quit.The scocial society is cruel,we shall beat the job.


Great work, just some mistakes throughout the entry, but I did understand what you were trying to say. Just some minor errors in some of the verb conjugation. Overall, keep up the great work!

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