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Nasrin
To be an Olympic Athlete ;) Olympic athletes must be strong both physically and mentally. First of all, if you hope to compete in an Olympic sport, you must be physically strong like Hercules (i think). Furthermore, aspiring Olympians must train vigorously for many years. For the most demanding sports, they train several hours a day, five or six days a week, for ten or more years to become a real olympic athlete. Being mentally strong means that he or she must be able to withstand the intense pressure of international competition with its accompanying media coverage. p/s: Not everyone can win a medal, so Olympians must possess the inner strength to live with defeat.
2012년 2월 25일 오후 4:00
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To be an Olympic Athlete ;)

Olympic athletes must be strong both physically and mentally. First of all, if you hope to compete in an Olympic sport, you must be physically strong like Hercules (think).

Furthermore, aspiring Olympians must train vigorously for many years. For the most demanding sports, they train several hours a day, five or six days a week, for ten or more years to become a real olympic athlete.

Being mentally strong means that he or she must be able to withstand the intense pressure of international competition with its accompanying media coverage.

P.S. Not everyone can win a medal, so Olympians must possess the inner strength to live with defeat.

Super writing. 

2012년 4월 21일
It is p.s. Nice writing. Go kick your room mate he has not written.
2012년 2월 25일
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