Hello,everyone. I'm a new member in the community. My English is poor.

Use more periods. It helps your readers.

Languages (e.g., English) and nationalities (e.g., American) begin with capital letters.

So many times I commit make mistakes. If you can help me, I would be more than really happy.

People who are bold and who aren't afraid of making mistakes learn the fastest. :)

I'm a university student from China. I'm learning studying economics at school.

I've enjoyed talking about culture, history, movies, and music education.

Use simple present when you talk about habits or activities you do every day, week, months, etc.

Also, leave a space after the comma.

I'm eager to communicate with people all over the world.

This is a great place to do that!