David Jonn
My favorite sport is: Hello friends, Today I'm gonna write about my favorite sport. My favorite sport is tennis. I love play tennis, althought I am not so good, but I try. I also like watching tennis matches, my favorite player is Nole, I follow him since he won his first grand slam in Melbourne Park, Australia (2008) Now, you tell me, what is your favorite sport?
2012년 3월 27일 오전 5:12
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My favorite sport is: Hello friends, Today I'm gonna write about my favorite sport. My favorite sport is tennis. I love play tennis, 💋🍆🍑🍒althought I am not so good, but I try. I also like watching tennis matches, my favorite player is Nole, I follow him since he won his first grand slam in Melbourne Park, Australia (2008) Now, you tell me, what is your favorite sport? 👉🏿👈🏿
2024년 5월 6일

My favorite sport is:

Hello friends,
Today I'm gonna going to write about my favorite sport.
My favorite sport is tennis. I to love play tennis, althought I am not so skilled at it as of yet. I also like watching tennis matches, and my favorite player is Novak Djokovic (aka "Nole"). I have been a fan of his since he won his first grand slam in Melbourne Park, Australia (2008)

Now, please tell me, what is your favorite sport?

 

<em>Hi David Jonn! Overall, a nice piece of writing. I "corrected" the slang of "gonna" mainly for the benefit of others (not to use such terms in places of learning such as this, try to be more formal. In one's speech, or among friends, it is okay. Similarly, I took out "you" in your final question) Perhaps it is just me, but that's  my humble opinion. Also, I provided Novak's full name, not just his nickname, for those who want to know who he is. Tennis is my favorite sport to watch and play also! And yes, that was a great tournament and a great final he played against Tsonga! While I do like and appreciate Nole's game, Federer is my favorite! Just as with your tennis, keep practicing your writing, and it will improve rapidly. Best of luck! J.</em>

2012년 3월 27일

My favorite sport is:

Hello friends,
Today I'm gonna write about my favorite sport.
My favorite sport is tennis. I love to play tennis, althought I am not so good, but I try. I also like watching tennis matches, my favorite player is Nole, I have followed him since he won his first grand slam in Melbourne Park, Australia (2008)

Now, you tell me, what is your favorite sport?

2012년 3월 27일

My favorite sport is:

Hello friends,
Today I'm gonna write about my favorite sport.
My favorite sport is tennis. I love <em>to</em> play tennis, <em>although</em> I am not so good, but I try.  I also like watching tennis matches, my favorite player is Nole, I follow him since he won his first grand slam in Melbourne Park, Australia (2008)

Now, you tell me, what is your favorite sport?

 

Hi David, Good job writing.  My favorite sport to play is golf.  My favorite sport to watch is american football. 

 

2012년 3월 27일
My favorite sport is badminton~!!
2012년 3월 27일
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