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Happy Day I have a holiday from Apr 02 to Apr 04. On Apr 02, I and my family got up so earlier. we intented to Green Expo Garden Exhibition. firstly, we took 62 bus, then transfer other bus. But when we arrived at transfer station that we found bus is canceled. We couldn't go to there. and the weather is so cold. finally, we gave up to there. we went home. On Apr 03, I and my grandmother and grandfather went to my mother's home. We met my sister's chlid and their new house. noon, we have a delicious lunch together. We are very happy. On Apr 04, I went to shopping. I brought a shoes which I like it. It spent my 400 yuan. I think we should have a beautiful and comfortable shose. We can wear them to anywhere. To engoy nice everyday!
2012년 4월 4일 오전 10:22
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a Happy Day

I had a holiday from Apr 02 to Apr 04.
On Apr 02, My family and I got up earlier than ever.We visited  Green Expo Garden Exhibition at first.We took 62 bus, then transfer other bus(!!). But when we arrived at transfer station we found the bus is canceled.We couldn't go there. and the weather was so cold.Finally, we gave up going there.So we cameback home.
On Apr 03, My grandmother and I went to my mother's home. We met my sister's chlid and visited their new house.We had a delicious lunch together.We were very happy.
On Apr 04, I went to shopping.I bought a pair of shoes which I like it. It cost 400 yuan.I think we should have  beautiful and comfortable shose. We can put them on everywhere.

2012년 4월 4일
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