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Jack´s Diary on 08/16 今日は七夕です。中国のバレンタインデーと言われています。大勢の人はこの祝日を慶祝します。広州にはホタルを釈放することについての活動が行われていました。僕は全然知らない、残念でした。 There are so many Japanese words that I don't know,so I write the diary with translation software.

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Jack´s Diary on 08/16

今日は七夕です。中国のバレンタインデーと言われています。大勢の人はこの祝日(1)を慶祝し祝います。広州にはホタルを釈放する放すことについての活動催しが行われていました。僕は全然知らないくて、残念でした。

There are so many Japanese words that I don't know,so I write the diary with
translation software.

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(1)祝日 means holiday. I guess it is not holiday..?
(2)I corrected
慶祝します, 釈放する, 活動 to 祝います(祝う), 放す, 催し respectively. Chinese words often could have something special meaning or heavy image in Japanese sentence. They are not always mistake, however, most of them can be described easier way.

Well, I didn't know it was the
七夕 yesterday there. The event to release fireflies (ホタル) seems nice!!

We have it on 7th July (7th August in some districts) here. On this day, we decorate bamboo with so many small strips of paper. On their strips, people's, mostly children's wishes are written. And we pray to the stars that their wishes will come true. So it is mainly for children here.
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Jack´s Diary on 08/16

今日は七夕です。中国のバレンタインデーと言われています。大勢の人はがこの祝日を慶祝お祝いします。広州にはではホタルを釈放することについての放すという活動が行われていました。僕は全然知らない知らなかったので、残念でしたです。

There are so many Japanese words that I don't know,so I write the diary with
translation software.

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