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A Breathtaking Adventure ( 6-2012.6.2) A Breathtaking Adventure ( 6-2012.6.2) If you ask me one thing which is the most risky I’ve ever done, I will tell you that I have adventures every-day. But if you sit on me and ask me my most breathtaking adventure, I’d say that’s the time I climbed the pavilion diff. It was a sunny day and the hill was very green, flowers were opening, the light was flashing and the wind was touching my face gently. I was with mom and a foreign friend named Yeves. Suddenly, when I looked up, I saw a little pavilion which we can have a rest, and it’s not far. So I went up there quicky followed by Yeves and mom. But when I sat down on a side of the stool, I noticed there’s a rope nailed on the cliff, so I demanded that we should try to climb it. Mom was scared, but we went down anyway. I grabbed the rop and tried to climb it. It’s a cliff, so there’s no place for me to rest my feet. I can only pull myself up using my arm! If I open my hand and let go, then I’ll fall off through a bundred feet cliff, if I don’t, I will if don’t go up in five minutes. So I suppose that the cliff is the ground, and I’m waling on it just with my hands grabbing a rope! So I “walked” for four minutes, and finally pulled my self up on to the stool. Game over!

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A Breathtaking Adventure ( 6-2012.6.2)
If you ask me one thing which is the most risky I’ve ever done, I will tell you that I have adventures every-day. But if you sit on me and ask me my most breathtaking adventure, I’d say that’s the time I climbed the pavilion diff cliff.
It was a sunny day and the hill was very green, flowers were opening, the light was flashing and the wind was touching my face gently. I was with mom and a foreign friend named Yeves. Suddenly, when I looked up, I saw a little pavilion in which we can have a rest, and it’s not far. So I went up there quicky followed by Yeves and mom. But when I sat down on a side of the stool, I noticed there’s a rope nailed on the cliff, so I demanded that we should try to climb it. Mom was scared, but we went down anyway.
I grabbed the rope and tried to climb it. It’s a cliff, so there’s no place for me to rest my feet. I can only pull myself up using my arms! If I open my hands and let go, then I’ll fall off through of a bundred feet hundred foot cliff, if I don’t, I will if don’t go up in five minutes. So I suppose that the cliff is the ground, and I’m walking on it just with my hands grabbing a rope! So I “walked” for four minutes, and finally pulled my self up on to the stool.
Game over!

 

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You're a very brave girl Mille! I would be too scared to climb down a cliff. Great story and great entry!

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