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..an ordinary day
Today is a ordinary day. I have spent a lot of time studying English.
...the day isn't over,
I like to spend time...
Thanks them for giving me their love! I'm happy.
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I know English a little so don't take my correction too serious :)
You've done very well!
I think there are some things you need to pay attention to, though :)
Ordinary day
Today is an ordinary day,I have spent a lot of time studying English, I have read several English articles. Also,I have listened to music, I have done some housework, and I had an afternoon nap. The weather was sunny, very lovely. Now it's cloudy, it will rain in the evening, I think.
Of course, the day isn't over, but I like this day, I like spending time with my parents, it's nice. I love my family and my dad and mum, I think they are the best parents in the world. I thank them for giving me great love! I love my life, I'm satisfied.
- I think that Present Perfect would be more appropriate because the time period isn't finished
- Pay attention to the gerund after certain verbs ( like ) or verbs with preposition ( thank someone for )
- To form the superlative, the compared term ( adjective or adverb - "best" is your case) must be preceded by the definite article "the"
I'm here if you have any questions ;)
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