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my first lesson today was my first lesson Skype. I liked, but i need to practice more .... i have very difficult for talk

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my first lesson

today was my first lesson Skype. I liked, but i need to practice more .... i have very difficult for talk

Correction: Today was my first lesson on Skype. I liked it but I need to practice more...

 

Notes:

1. You have to capitalize the first letter of every sentence.

2. You need the word 'on' in from of Skype. It's what's call a "preposition." Other prepositions are: at, upon, in, by, to, for, over, about, towards. Examples of preposition in use:

"Today was my first lesson at school."

"I had my first lesson in school today."

3. When you say, "...I need to practice more..." it already means you are having difficulty speaking English so there's no need to say, "...I still have difficulty talking in English..." You are just repeating youself and it's not good to repeat yourself.

 

Hope this helps. Best of luck, friend.

 

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my first lesson

today was my first lesson Skype. I liked, but i need to practice more .... i have very difficult for talk

 

Correction:

 

Today is my first lesson in Skype.  I like it but I have difficulty in talking.  I need to practice more.

 

 

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