First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone! I am from China [and I would] like learn English. join in the family.I think this is my pleasure! It is my pleasure to join this family! My English name is Twinkle!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hello.everyone!I come from china.i like learn english.join in the family.I think this is my pleasure!my english name is twinkle!

Hello everyone! I am from China, I like learning English, and join the family, I think this is my pleasure! My English name is Twinkle!

... Welcome Twinkle :)