Brianna
Why do you apply for this company?(or Why are you apply this company) The first that this company is international and it will be helpful to raise my value.
2010년 8월 29일 오후 3:44
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Why are you submitting an application to this (our) company?

I am applying to your (this) company because it is international and will raise my value. 


(In any interview - do not say why the company wil make you better).
(Always say why you will make the company better). 

Just a tip.

2010년 9월 30일

Why do you apply <strike>for</strike> to this company?  (or Why are you applying to this company)  [I prefer the second sentence.]

<strike>The first that</strike> I am applying to this company because it is an international company and <strike>it</strike> will <strike>be</strike> help<strike>ful</strike> <strike>to</strike> raise my value.  [I don't understand the "raise my value" part; maybe "and will help me gain (valuable) experience."]
2010년 8월 29일
hahaha how's your throat? i guess it means you miss me, aren't you?ㅋㅋㅋ my thanks giving day was great, as i said i went to Busan. in fact somthing spoiled my feeling but i forgot already ^^ and how's your her who was drunken? and i found out you checked you can't speak english at all on your profile, if you want i'll teach you ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2010년 9월 30일
The reason I'm applying to this company is that the pay is good and i belive it isn't going bankrupt easily. hey~ how was your 추석. was it happy? For me? I caught a cold during 추석. no. The cold caught me. my throat is awollen and I think it's because of you. I talked a lot when you're here, that's why my throat has weaker immune system. I can sue you. Buy me some delicious and healthy food otherwise meet me in court!
2010년 9월 24일

Why do you apply for this company?(or Why are you apply this company)
Why are you applying to this company? [better]
Why did you apply to this company? [good]

The first that this company is international and it will be helpful to raise my value.
I am applying to this company because firstly, it is an international company, and secondly, I believe I will fit well with the company's culture, and will add value to the role.

My preference is not to say 'international company'..
I am applying to this company because I believe I will fit in well with the company's culture, and will add value to the role.

수진씨 행운을 빕니다~~!^^
2010년 9월 4일
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