A rainy day I don't like rainy day all the time.Because it makes me unhappy.I can't see sun in the sky.On the other hand,I feel uncomfortable on Cloudy day .If I want to go outside,I have to take

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A rainy day I don't like rainy day all the time.Because it makes me unhappy.I can't see sun in the sky.On the other hand,I feel uncomfortable on Cloudy day .If I want to go outside,I have to take an umbrella .it's inconvenient on rainy day. Above all,heavy rain wet me.So make me embarrassed.Maybe I get a cold.That's terrible. When I was a child,one day,I want to swim,but It bagin to rain.As a result,I had to stay at home.I couldn't play games with other friends outside,so I hate rainy day. Oh,it's rainy now.

2012년 8월 23일 오후 12:55

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A rainy day

I don't like rainy days all the time because it makes me unhappy.I can't see sun in the sky.On the other hand,I feel uncomfortable in cloudy days .If I want to go outside,I have to take an umbrella with me.It's inconvenient on rainy day. (上文已有提到，不用再重复了。其实改成It's inconvenient for me to take an unbrella更好些)Above all,heavy rain wets me.It makes me so embarrassed.Maybe I`ll get a cold.That's terrible. （It`s possible to catch a cold.）
When I was a child.One day I wanted to swim,but it began to rain.As a result,I had to stay at home.I couldn't play games with other friends outside,so that`s why I hate rainy days.
Oh,it's raining now.(rainy表示的是状态，用rain可能更恰当些)