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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am learning English because I want to apply in another country and I want to study abroad I want to make friends from another counties My native language is Farsi and I grew up in Iran I enjoy reading books and watching movies
2012년 9월 4일 오후 4:52
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English because I want to apply [to live? / work? ] in another country, and I want to study abroad. I want to make friends from another countries.
My native language is Farsi and I grew up in Iran.
I enjoy reading books and watching movies.

2012년 9월 5일
You have made your own corrections and done them well.
2014년 12월 28일
Best wishes
2012년 9월 5일

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English because I want to apply in another country and I want to study abroad. I want to make friends from other countries.
My native language is Farsi and I grew up in Iran.
I enjoy reading books and watching movies.

2012년 9월 5일

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English because I want to apply in another country, and I want to study abroad. I want to make friends from other countries.
My native language is Farsi and I grew up in Iran.
I enjoy reading books and watching movies.

2012년 9월 5일
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