First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi everybody! I have learnd English during half year, but i did not write in me notebook. And now I want to edit my mistake.
My name is Serge. I'm from St.-Petersburg, Russia. I'm 23 y,o, I'm engineer of IT. I am interested in telecommunication, in particular technologies like a PON, xWDM etc. I like swimming, volleyball, computers and IT. But me passion is English, I thing, if you want to learn any language as good as possible, you have to like this language.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi everybody! I have learned English for six months, but I have not yet written in my notebook. Now I want to edit my mistakes.
My name is Serge. I'm from St. Petersburg, Russia. I'm 23, and I'm an IT engineer. I am interested in telecommunications, in particular technologies like PON, xWDM, etc. I like swimming, volleyball, computers, and IT, but my passion is English. I think, if you want to master any language, you must enjoy the language.
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Sergey,
I corrected the English in your entry. It is a very good first entry.
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