please correct this wriating!
providing children whit poket money on a weekly basis can benefit them in the futuare . do u agree or disagree? although sametimes a cantested issue,it is argued that providing children whit a modest amount of pocket money on a weekly basis is helpfull to thair development
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Any time Sarah,,keep up with the good job and never forget mistakes are essential to learning process.Cheers!
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thank u so much Amir jun.
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except for some spelling mistakes,it is very well developed writing or should I say introductory paragraph
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Please correct this writing!
Providing children with pocket money on a weekly basis can benefit them in the future. Do you agree or disagree? Although sometimes a contested issue, it is argued that providing children with a modest amount of pocket money on a weekly basis is helpful to their development.
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