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First notebook entry: Introducing myself My name is Cindy ,i want to make friends all over the world ,now ,the English is important ,so i want to learn English . Most important of all , I love English. come on ,girl .

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Cindy.  i I want to make friends from all over the world.  now Now, the English is important, so i I want to learn English.

Most important of all, I love English.

come on, girl.


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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Cindy, I want to make friends from  all over the world . Now, English is important, so I want to learn English .

Most important of all, I love English.

come on, girl .

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